His heart pounding, John continued approaching the dark mass. Realizing his smg was still in his hands, he clipped it to his left thigh, while taking out a frag grenade just incase. So far it was going well, most of the spiders were ignoring him, the few that weren't, made no move to attack... yet.

Despite focusing on the spiders, he kept his ears open for any kind of noise that signalled danger. A friend had once taught him to always be aware of your surroundings. Thats when he detected hurried footsteps. Turning his head slightly towards the sound, John spotted a person rushing into the area, who stopped at the sight of him. "Who are you and what the hell are you doing?" the latter demanded.

Another survivor? security guard by his looks "A teammate of mine is most likely in trouble, if you want answers talk to my Commander up on the catwalks. And lower your weapon, my squad will ice you if you try anything"

No Herobrine, please!

Ha! That's awesome.

So i got bored, and i decided to draw some (shitty) shit. I just decided to do this and pumped it out in 15, 20 minutes. COMIC

*shrugs* I'm not very happy with it. but then again i didn't really try. I was mostly experimenting with making the comic coherent with the least amount of panels i could. I feel like I succeeded.

Captacha: Qane

Just a suggestion: Becker rushed into the room and the first thing that caught his eye was a mass of giant spiders, and approaching them with his hands out was an armored figure.

Don't edit your post with what I wrote. This was just a suggestion on how to write your characters entry into the room. And I'm a noob writer, I'm sure others could do much much better.

Edit: Ignore this post. I made it a tad too late. Your edited post sounds much better now. Nice job.

Well, you could always just go by last names. Also, avoid saying what another character does. Antonio's character might not be startled at all by you, as he's more focused on the pile of giant tarantulas.

Roninberg. I'm not trying to criticise you. But could you find another way to describe me? "Startling the other John" or "The other John" doesn't sound realistic. Your character can't possibly know my name yet.

Hawaii?! Sweet! Everyone get driving directions from Google Maps. Whenever I get driving directions from my house to Honolulu, Hawaii, it always tells me to "Kayak across the Pacific Ocean." That's feasible, right?

Completely, if you travel by map that is.

CAPTACHA: VOHL, why does that look so familiar?

Is that my new nickname?

And yet, somehow, 43 is still a numerically greater integer.

We don't need Chuck Norris, we need...

... hit it, Voyager.

Commander Shepard!!!

You guys are just too cute for me to handle.

Only women are allowed to call me cute. :P

Good idea for this thread. A long time weirdoo started a thread with the goal of reaching 100 pages. That would require 2,000 posts in the thread. The Ban Game thread went farther than that lol. But if you work at it, we could get that far.

As for the Minecraft stuff, still haven't played it.

Gunshots rang out from under the generator. No doubt it was Rivet. While she was not on his favorites list, she was still a teammate. He was about to fire upon the mass of creatures, to clear a path when he remembered what Raphael said "See that? They're curious, not dangerous" If thats true, then Rivet didn't know that, she must have fired out of shock Not thinking about the danger, he rushed down the stairs pushing past Thomas and sprinted towards the generator room. As he neared the spiders, he slowed to a walk, holding out both his hands. Damm I acted too hastily, I really hope their as friendly as that security sergeant says

oops here is a link that works. herobrine

it took some advice from someone here i thought it was a good idea so yeah anyways ill post topics of.....well marine565's stuff. (basically like a forum in a forum) here anybody know about herobrine in minecraft? there are some videos out there here is one herobrine

This sound very promising.

Do you have any information you could pass along for this?

When I did my bachelor project (Engineering, Production Management) we had a company we did a project for. Basicly we used very little of their time, maximum total 2 days with the production manager, then we spent a semester, almost half a year fulltime on brainstorming, calculations, warehouse analysis etc. etc. All this they got for free... So i'm saying that ZPS could try to list their needs and see if a pair of students show up. Have a link to the Danish "Education Guide" where I found a relevant Bachelor.

As said earlier, the advertising for the students should properly be something like : "Innovative Game company with sky-high ambitions seek Creative students for a marketing strategy with limited funds. Candidates should be near the end of their bachelor and have excellent understanding of social media and preferbly a passion for Gaming"...

There, fwah. Sorry that took so long. If you don't like any of the stuff in there Shawn, just say the word and I'll fix it. I'm hoping that I made the spider come off as more scared than attacking, but of course Rivet doesn't know this and just saw a giant monster bug thing coming at her.

Just adding the link to the thread.

Rivet watched the monitor of her PMA as it went through the reboot subroutines. To her surprise no errors immediately flashed across the screen. It looked and sounded as if the generator was stable. A slight breeze started blowing down the tunnel, immediately seeming to drop the temperature around her by forty degrees. She smiled and laid back, letting the cool air slide across her and dry her sweat soaked skin. Surrounded by the gentle hum of a machine in desperate need of an overhaul, glazed in the sweat of dangerous situation, and rewarded for a job well done with simple fresh air; this was her few moments of happiness.

After a few seconds of resting, she sighed and propped herself up on an elbow. Clicking on her radio, she was about to report that the generator should work for at least how long it took for them to do what they needed to do, but stopped herself. No sound came through the comm. She pursed her lips and smacked it a few times before pulling it off her ear. Turning it over in her fingers she looked for anywhere she might have somehow busted it. She turned her eyes up to the generator and cursed to herself. She had forgotten the first rule in maintenance. "Don't rush, take it all step by step," she muttered. The generator had let out a localized magnetic burst when it started up. Her earpiece was designed to be used in conjunction with her helmet and as such didn't have the same EMP shielding as it. This wasn't the first time she fried a comm and it probably wouldn't be the last. Besides, the left receiver was still in her helmet.

Under the hum of the generator, Rivet heard sounds of some big commotion. She shrugged it off as the power suit moving around and got to work putting her PMA back in its satchel. Just as she closed it, something clattered near by. She looked down past her knees towards to small tunnel opening. Her helmet rolled slowly past. She scowled and shouted out "Hey, quit fuckin' around with my shit!" No response. "Hello?" She slipped a small flashlight from her belt and clicked it on, shining the beam through the opening. "Is someon-" Something flashed past. Low to the ground. Far too many legs. Rivet's hand slipped to her pistol, slowly unbuckling the holster.

The generator hit its main phase with a loud click and the power burst back on, flooding the chamber with light. Immediately the forelegs, head, and thorax of what appeared to be a massive insect slammed through the opening. Rivet screamed, barely pulling her legs away from it. The creature thrashed wildly, trying to force itself further into the opening. Rivet kicked it in the head, crushing one of its eyes, then desperately pulled herself out of the spider's reach. Pulling her pistol, she fired repeatedly down between her knees, into the head of the monster. Four bullets, one of the mandibles burst off the body. Eight, half of its head was torn off. Click....clickclickclickclick. All twelve rounds spent. The insect lay in a heap several feet in front of her. Her eyes were wide and she was breathing heavy. The sweat was back. A loud ringing reverberated through her ears from shooting in such a confined space. "FUCK! FUCK FUCK FUCKING SHIT! WHAT THE FUCK?!" She dropped the empty magazine from the pistol and quickly loaded in another, keeping the barrel pointed at the corpse. A faint amount of light streamed around its abdomen. Shadows darted past the light, along with the sound of multiple legs running around. She looked down at the floor. Her satchel, radio, and the still lit flashlight where sitting between the forelegs of the spider. Slowly, she inched forward towards the items. Just as she reached out, something slammed into the corpse on its other side. Rivet fell back and fear took over. She could put up with many things, but insects weren't one of them. She crawled as quickly as she could to the back of the tunnel and knocked open a vent. Inside was a small cramped room lined with massive cables leading through the wall into the generator. On the far wall another vent grate sat half way up. She pulled it open and climbed inside, dragging herself through the narrow space, further into the facility.

This sound very promising.

Do you have any information you could pass along for this?

When I did my bachelor project (Engineering, Production Management) we had a company we did a project for. Basicly we used very little of their time, maximum total 2 days with the production manager, then we spent a semester, almost half a year fulltime on brainstorming, calculations, warehouse analysis etc. etc. All this they got for free... So i'm saying that ZPS could try to list their needs and see if a pair of students show up. Have a link to the Danish "Education Guide" where I find a relevant Bachelor.

As said earlier, the advertising for the students should properly be something like : "Innovative Game company with sky-high ambitions seek Creative students for a marketing strategy with limited funds. Candidates should be near the end of their bachelor and have excellent understanding of social media and preferbly a passion for Gaming"...

I think that this would be perfect for ZPS.

Professional help with advertising at an afordable cost.

You should really E-mail ZPS or Gert your idea, together with your knowledge and experience with this kind of project.

"Leave Rivet?" John exclaimed, "Forget it, we're not leaving a squad member behind, unless there's absolutely no option left"